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Volume 1 Xuanyang Sect Volume 2 Miscellaneous Words

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    After uploading for more than a month, the first volume is finally finished. The protagonist Lu Shaoyu is also leaving the Xuanyang Sect and going to another big environment.  In this volume, the protagonist transforms from a Nascent Soul warrior back to a child. There are many dialogues in many places, all of which seem childish and ridiculous, completely unlike the character of a Nascent Soul warrior. For this reason, the book reviews have been criticized  Many times.  Actually, my purpose is to write it from the perspective of a child, not to stand out too much, and to make the protagonist look like an ordinary child.  But maybe it¡¯s because it was set from the beginning that the protagonist is the reincarnation of a strong man, which made everyone think that a strong man must have a strong character.  In addition, the writing is not good, and the various descriptions are not adequate, making it a bit nondescript and a bit counterproductive.  Overall, I am quite satisfied with the first volume.  But starting from the second volume, the protagonist will mature a lot.  The protagonist¡¯s parents are dead. Like many books, the protagonist¡¯s parents are always very easy to die, as if the protagonist is the natural nemesis of his parents. Then the protagonist uses revenge as a clue to open up another main line.  Haha, it¡¯s inevitable to be cliche.  But I think that the protagonist is destined to be strong, and his parents are just ordinary people. Instead of watching them slowly grow old and die, it is better to use this as a guide to create another pattern.  Of course, some people say that they can give the protagonist's parents skills to make them become powerful together.  Personally, I don¡¯t like this writing style that one person attains enlightenment and chickens and dogs ascend to heaven.  The protagonist may meet many people in his life, including relatives, brothers, friends, and enemies but the main plot is always only him, and others can only become short-lived supporting roles, because if the main plot is to be  Putting it above other people's descriptions, I'm afraid I can't handle it with my writing skills.  So, for the time being, the role of the protagonist¡¯s parents should come to an end.  ??Perhaps the death of parents is not a burden for the protagonist?  But in the fantasy world of Xianxia, ??anything is possible.  Maybe one day after countless years, his parents would appear in another form, perhaps as an enemy, perhaps as a friend, perhaps as a stranger passing by, perhaps in the end they would not appear again at all.  Who knows.  There is reincarnation in this world!  Of course, the same goes for his sister!  Perhaps one day in the future, this sister whom he has never met will appear in front of the protagonist in another way?  But when, where and with what storyline will it happen?  I don¡¯t even know it myself, because I haven¡¯t thought about it yet.  Or maybe it didn't show up in the end.  I have a habit of writing books, that is, I don¡¯t like to be constrained. I only set a specific direction in the outline, and then I write as I please, and I just write wherever I want. Sometimes a small plot can completely complete the subsequent direction.  Change, even I don¡¯t know how it will end.  Haha, it feels so imaginative.  I want to write a classic, a fairy tale of my own.  But it is very likely that what is written is a piece of garbage and an unknown book.  Who knows.  But I will work hard, as long as I try my best, that¡¯ll be fine!  Fuyan 2013.5.20
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