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    The third volume is over.

    New year, new start.

    The fourth volume is called "Chasing the Central Plains".

    The background of this volume is relatively grand. Many characters from the early stage will reappear, and many forces and characters that have been suppressed for a long time will also make their debut.

    At the same time in the fourth volume, I will take back many previous foreshadowings and fill in some of the pits.

    Returning to the topic, let's review the whole of the third volume of "Youth Detained Brigade". Let's talk about the good and the bad. A single chapter is a rare opportunity for readers and authors to communicate.  .  .

    I will talk frankly with you about the troubles and problems encountered in writing, so that everyone can have a preliminary understanding of the author's state of mind, inner transformation, etc.

    When I first prepared the structure of this volume, I planned to write it in the mode of travel notes, and then slowly laid the groundwork and slowly unfolded the characters on the way.

    After writing more than a dozen chapters, I realized that the mode of changing maps is not popular with everyone, and readers don't like the setting of Xu Baipro's seal either.  But the main tone had already been set, and I couldn't "change it day and night". During that time, I was very confused, and my writing state became very anxious.

    I hastily revised the outline of the third volume, adjusted the framework structure, and even sent a single chapter to seek everyone's opinions.

    ? While keeping updated, while revising the outline, after a long period of downturn, my aunt finally came.

    The data skyrocketed

    ? From double cultivation to returning to Beijing to leaving Beijing, the peak of follow-up is even comparable to the chapter of the father-son showdown in the second volume.

    What is the problem in the first half of this volume? I have made a summary before, and the characters and maps still have no sense of substitution.

    Any novel that changes the map will encounter this kind of problem, but I have already worked out a way to crack it, and I want to try it if I have the opportunity in the future.

    Next, let¡¯s talk about the issue of rhythm. I have carefully studied the changes in the revision. For any chapters that are gradually laid out, the revision will drop sharply, and then readers will scold them.

    The author was impatient and hurriedly speeded up the pace, and then the readers scolded the pace for being too fast and the writing was not good.

    This forms a vicious circle.

    In this regard, I have come to two conclusions. First, it may be that I am too young, not calm enough, and easily influenced by data.  Second, probably the celebrity effect is not enough.

    If it is a platinum author who has been famous for a long time, readers may be more patient and able to bear the foreshadowing of dozens of chapters.

    But for a small flutter (such as me), I am not so patient.

    In addition to the problems summarized above, I am more concerned about a "not cool enough" problem mentioned by readers recently.

    If you are also a friend who is writing, you can think about what I will say next.

    Sometimes, we have to make a trade-off between logic and coolness. Books that are too logical are often not enjoyable, so web articles must be "brainless".

    However, if it is too brainless, it will appear too white. The brainless little white essays in the readers' mouths often refer to this kind of book.

    Take the plot of the Curly Tail Martial Arts League as an example. In fact, I have a better way of writing, which is very cool and cool.

    But as a result, Xu Pingfeng's personality collapsed.

    A book written in the middle and late stages is different from the early stage, and it can't just serve coolness.  The first premise of my current writing is to maintain the main tone of the whole book, which includes character design, plot, Kyushu situation and so on.

    Then, think about being cool again.

    As one of the important figures, Xu Pingfeng is set up here, even if death is imminent, he will calmly face it calmly.

    Regarding Xu Qi'an's slap in the face, his unhappiness is already the limit, and it is impossible to make him lose his temper.

    But this makes readers unhappy.

    So I just said, logic and coolness, sometimes you can't have both.

    If you want him to come back empty-handed, if you steal chickens without losing money, you will think that this is the big villain?

    What about the characters?

    Here is a little trick, maintaining the character is more important than refreshing.  Even if you give up part of the fun, you must maintain the character's style.

    ? For two books with similar grades, one may be considered a no-brainer, and the other may be a no-brainer.

    Why?

    ?Because the former only cares about being cool, while the latter will maintain the character in the book.

    You will scold me because a short plot is not cool enough, but you will not abandon the book.  But if the human setting collapses, there will be a lot of people who abandon the book.

    Am I right?

    Bringing the topic back, updates have always been my anxiety and headache.

    I oftenBecause a period of daily life is not interesting enough, I sit in front of the computer for a long time, and often because I don¡¯t fully understand a case, I can¡¯t start writing for most of the day.

    However, I was anxious because the update time was approaching and I could not deliver the manuscript.

    Often cause delays.

    Speed ??and quality are really incompatible. Sometimes the state is wrong and the mind is muddled, which will also cause the update quality to decline.

    It is inevitable.

    Then, every time I see a reader say in a chapter review: Rest when you are tired, don't update.

    I mean it.

    When I woke up the next day, I found that the chapter review was like this: Fuck, this is so inflated, the monthly pass is torn.

    Ha ha ha ha, slot!

    The writing of this volume was stumbled and exhausted, and everyone cursed, but the data is not bad.

    The average order is 90,000.

    The rise is very fast, which is my only comfort.

    Explain that although there are minor flaws in what I wrote, it is relatively stable overall.  The lines that should be buried are buried, and the characters that should be portrayed are portrayed.

    Breaking 100,000 during the serialization period should not be a big problem, um, I hope I didn't raise the flag.

    Starting from the fourth volume, the book's biggest climax and biggest pit will kick off.

    I will try to lay the groundwork slowly, without going to follow-up, and slowly portray some supporting roles.

    For me, it is a brand new challenge.

    The biggest charm of writing a book lies in this, constantly seeking breakthroughs, even if the direction is wrong, the hips are stretched, and the order is down, at least I have tried and will learn some new things.

    I always hope that what this book brings to everyone is joy and happiness, at least most of the time.

    This is my greatest motivation for writing books and my greatest sense of accomplishment.

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